20210724雅思写作范文分享:现代人变得更依赖还是更独立?

重庆编辑 2021-07-26 16:44

大作文题目

Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think that people are becoming more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

 

写作思路

现代人变得更依赖还是更独立,这个问题可以从不同的角度来看。现代社会分工越来越细,每个人都需要依赖其他人的劳动成果才能生存;在公司里面,有不同的部门,同事之间需要密切合作,才能完成工作任务,所以从这个角度来看,人们确实变得更加相互依赖。如果从生活角度来看,人们似乎越来越独立,互联网使得人们不用再求助邻居朋友,也减少了面对面交流。更多的人选择小家庭或者独自居住,对于家人的依赖也越来越少。

 

重点词汇与语料

interdependent 互相依赖

labor division 劳动分工

specialize in 专注于

key element 要素

consist of 组成

complicated 复杂的

a strong awareness 强烈的意识

extended family 大家庭

network age 网络时代

solitary 孤僻的

in a sense 在某种意义上

advent 出现

contribute to 有助于

 

 

参考范文

It is said that we are now living in an increasingly interdependent world, but on the other hand, more and more people appear to be independent in their lives.    

 

Obviously, labor division is becoming highly advanced in the modern world, with everyone specializing in a certain field. It is impossible for a person to produce all necessities in his life by himself and he has to buy goods in the market, which means he needs to depend on the work of other people. In addition, cooperation has become a key element in our daily work. When a company consists of dozens of departments and a project becomes huge and complicated, it is hard to imagine that one person can finish his task without cooperating with his colleagues.       

 

On the other hand, it is interesting to note that people today have a strong awareness of independence, which is particularly shown in their private lives. For example, many young people are reluctant to live with their parents, as they did in traditional extended families. Instead, they establish small families and some choose to live alone. Another example is that, in this network age, increasingly numbers of people become solitary, with less face-to-face communication in life. They can get answers to almost all questions by searching on the web, or get things done with the help of various Apps, not relying on neighbors and friends any more. So, in a sense, the advent of the Internet has contributed to their independent lifestyles.                           

 

Overall, I am of the opinion that individuals cannot live without communication and cooperation with others. As the economy develops, our work and lives are closely linked with others’ contribution to society. But it is also true that people have more independence in their personal choices.   

 

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