嗨，今天新航道的小编来教大家怎么修饰托福写作文章，从此告别大白话。
A：状语前置
在英文写作里，状语前置是一种相当常用的句式变换手法。
Historically, in America workers have been mercilessly exploited by big corporations. For example, garment industry workers, railway workers and fruit pickers were suffering many hardships and paid very little.
Clearly, this is a positive alternative for motivated parents and their children.
Undoubtedly, the most basic elements of writing are to be found in pictures.
B 句中做手脚
同理，在新托福作文的句中也经常可以引入小短语，它会让句子显得更加灵活多变。
Shopping, a necessary part of daily life, is increasingly time-consuming (消耗时间的 ) in North America.
We’II all die in the end, and because of this, we should cherish every moment of life.
In America, those who move long distances are generally the kind of people who play the major role in holding the community together, in large part because / partly because they are more confident and have better career opportunities.
The internet is a simple collection of screens
改成
The Internet is, simply, a collection of screens of information ( known as webpages ) that reside on thousands of computers around the world.
A positive attitude, after all, is essential for a student’s academic performance.
Upon reflection, I recognize, sadly, my experience of being a high-school student and those of the high-school students today are not as different as I hoped.
Many scientists believe that human activity has very little, if any, impact on the recent warming trend on Earth.
C副词领路人
有些表示幅度或者范围的副词，如果放在形容词的前面引导形容词，经常可以起到让它们后面的形容词更加明确的作用。
例如: The ability to speak English is increasingly important in a global society.
The medicine doesn’t cure the illness. It merely ( just) stops the pain.
The product’s success can’t be solely（- only，但注意solely只能作副词）attributed to the advertising.
类似的副词还有：approximately（大约），markedly (显著地)，substantially（大幅度地，显著地，在比较正式的文章和演讲中异常常用），considerably（显著地，可观地），slightly 微小地，marginally c略微地，和fractionally 本意是分数地，但一般就近似“微小程度地”意思。
D倒装
Not only should the parents spend more time with their children, they should also try to communicate with their children more often.
Only in this way can the problem of child obesity be effectively controlled.
Under no circumstances should teachers punish their students physically.
Strange as it may seem, parents’ attention sometimes hinders (阻碍) students’ academic progress.
近义词： hinder / impede / obstruct
Neither of these factors is the case any longer.
Never have there been more appropriate vehicles for direct marketing than the Internet and E-mails.
E强调句
用It is… that..或者It is… who…
Parents and siblings have a far greater impact on the development of their personality traits.
Though friends definitely play a significant role in shaping teenagers’ personality, it is the parents and siblings that have a far greater impact on the development of their personality traits.
F虚拟句
The recent crisis could not have occurred without the participation of the biggest players on Wall Street.
Had I lived in a small town, my life would have been confined to (被限制 ) very few possibilities.
G of的用法
Importance / help / value / interest / significance / necessity / quality等。 比如 :
Fossil fuel is of great importance to the development of industry, transportation and tourism.
Whether people in the developing world are suffering is of no interest to many wealthy citizens in industrial countries.
H 被动也疯狂
It can be argued that…
It has been noted that…
It’s observed that..
It’s believed that…
It’s commonly accepted that…
It’s generally recognized that…
It is reported that..（注意这里可以用现在时）
It’s estimated that…
I变性表决心
请注意这里的变性是指“改变词性”的句式变换手法。写作中的变性主要有三种：
改变前: People are concerned because the traditional values are gradually disappearing from the tribes.
People are concerned about the gradual disappearance of the traditional tribal values.
改变前: Some people don’t fulfill their responsibilities as parents.
改变后: Some people don’t fulfill their parental responsibilities.
Telecommuting（在家远程上班）can bring numerous benefits to both employees and employers.
Both employees and employers can benefit from telecommuting.
Telecommuting can benefit employers and employees.
Telecommuting is beneficial to both employees and employers.
Both employees and employers can be beneficiaries (受益者) of telecommuting.
J副词排成队
Athletes tend to move gracefully, energetically and powerfully.
Some people argue that the new instruction methodology can help students develop intellectually and emotionally.
☆All this material is now quickly, inexpensively and readily available from the comfort of our desks and work stations.
After the surgery, most young patients feel physically and mentally back to normal within a week.
M双重否定就是肯定
☆1t is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. 意思是：去做某事是现实的
☆ Not surprisingly,
It is not uncommon that
It was not unusual that
三、托福句库必备排比法
1．词语排比
(1)名词
We have nothing but truth, goodness and beauty.
我们除了真实、善良和漂亮之外，一无所有。
She gave up her family, her honor, and her fortune for liberty.
她放弃了家庭、荣耀和财富，只是为了追求自由。
用family，honor，fortune：比来突出她对自由的渴望以及毅然为之所做出的牺牲非常大。
(2)动词
Since now, we must pick ourselves up, dust ourselves off, and prepare ourselves for new challenges.
从现在开始，我们必须重新振作，整装待发，迎接新的挑战。
三个简单的动词“重新振作、整装待发、迎接挑战”，却能够有力地号召大家为当前的工作做好准备，起到鼓舞人心的作用。
During our life, we should never stop studying, thinking, and practicing.
在我们的一生中，我们必须不断学习，不断思考，不断实践。
用三个动词精炼、抽象地概括了人一生不断成长的过程，道出了人生的本质。
(3)形容词
What an ugly, greedy, and selfish man!
这是一个多么丑陋、贪婪，自私的人呀！
连用三个形容词塑造了一个丑陋的形象，也流露出了作者的厌恶之情。
Skateboarding is both exciting and dangerous.
滑板运动又兴奋又危险。
(4)副词
In they all came, one after another, some shyly, some boldly, some gracefully, some
awkwardly…(Dickens)
他们都进来了，一个接着一个，有的害羞，有的胆大，有的优雅，有的笨拙……
（狄更斯）
2．短语排比
(1)名词短语
Four things are not to be brought back: a word spoken, an arrow discharged, the divine decree and past time.(E.P.)
四件事情是无法收回来的：说出去的话，放出去的箭，神圣的法会，以及过去的时间。
Only depend on those values can we succeed – hard work and tolerance, fair play and courage…
我们要成功，就需要依靠以下这些价值观：努力工作和忍耐力，公平竞争和勇气……
(2)动词短语
Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe to assure the survival and success of liberty. (Kennedy)
(3)介词短语
Our government is a government of the people, by the people and for the people.
我们的政府是民有、民主、民享的政府。
(5)不定式短语
The time has come to relearn our history, to reaffirm our responsibility and to choose our new target.
是到了重新学习历史、重新确认责任、选择我们新的目标的时刻了。
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