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20170211雅思大作文范文及解析:雄心壮志的作用

作者: 2022-01-02 15:35 来源:重庆编辑
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Ambition is being emphasized in today’s society. How important do you think it is for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

 

题目大意

在如今社会,人们越来越重视有雄心壮志。你认为,它对于成功有多么重要呢?这是一种积极还是消极的品质呢?

 

思路解析

这是一道报告+利弊的混合类大作文,聊得是雄心壮志对于成功的重要性以及利弊分析。报告类的文章结构比较简单,根据问什么答什么的原则,主体段一分析雄心壮志的中重要性,主体段二分析它的利弊。审题时候需要注意两点,一是利弊分析需要明确做出比较,说明为什么优势更大或劣势更大。二是需要必须要围绕着succeed进行讨论,为了便于讨论,“succeed in life”需要给出更明确的定义,比如事业成功等。下面月半鸭和大家来看下具体观点。

 

首先来看雄心壮志对于成功的重要性。

拥有雄心壮志的人往往会有更加明确的目标和达成目标的决心。有了明确的目标,才能够集中时间和精力去试图完成目标,并且梳理清楚为了达成目标自己需要去做哪里事情或学习哪些新的知识和技能。而有了决心则可以激发自身的毅力和抗压能力,来克服过程中所会遇到的种种困难。

 

然后来看雄心壮志的利弊分析。

从事业角度来看,雄心壮志无疑是有益的品质,你很难想象一个成功人士是没有雄心壮志的,它几乎是一个人想要获得成功所必备的品质之一。正如同上面所说的,他能激发人们设立明确的目标并克服困难去达成。而当人们实现自己目标获得成功,不仅能获得精神上的满足,还有丰厚的物质回报。

但他确实也有负面作用,有些拥有雄心壮志的人可能会忽视家人和朋友的感情、自己的健康等。他们将时间和精力都花在达成目标上,而忽略陪伴家人的必要性、也不顾及自己健康的饮食作息。这样的想法和行为最终会伤害到自己和家庭。

 

范文示例

Ambitions seem to be the key to one's success,since ambitious people can find motivation to work hard and achieve their goals.I agree with this view,although they have to make some personal sacrifices on the road to success.

 

Ambitions can encourage people to work harder,which enables them to achieve their goals more easily.Success comes at a price,and people cannot attain their objectives unless they devote effort to reaching their targets.They tend to be self-disciplined and diligent as they are driven by their aspirations.They will continue to sharpen their skills,develop expertise and gain experience until they can reach the top in industry.Without ambitions,however,they could have given up if there were any challenges on the road to success.

 

Ambition is a valuable personality trait in the sense that it makes people optimistic and drives them to achieve success.Those with aspirations normally imagine the outcomes of being successful,so they would not feel frustrated or hurt in the face of adversity.This positive mental attitude can prompt them to achieve their potential and pursue targets which are otherwise unattainable to them.Their successes not only reward them well in financial terms but also contribute to social progress.

 

On the other hand,if people have high expectations of their achievement but fail to achieve their targets,they would feel disappointed and exhausted.They may have undue expectations over their accomplishments,but sometimes,it is not easy to implement their plans.Sometimes, ambitions may lead to wrong judgements,and push them to set unrealistic goals.Failing to meet targets may engender a sense of disappointment or self-doubt,and it can even evolve into mental disorders for people who have difficulty in managing stress.

 

相关词汇和语法结构

self-disciplined   自律的

sharpen their skills   提高技能

develop expertise   提升专业知识

personality trait   人格特质

Aspirations   愿望

have undue expectations over   过高的期望

set unrealistic goals    设定不切实际的目标

 

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