雅思大作文报告类话题改怎么来写?

重庆编辑 2021-08-03 14:53

雅思大作文,按问题类型来分,一般会有以下5种:

■ advantage&disadvantage

■ discussion

■ to what extent do you agree or disagree

■ cause&effect

■ problem&solution

 

大家在考场上常见的是前三种,关于是否同意、利弊分析和双边讨论的话题。而后两种都被统称为report(报告类)话题,在考场上较为少见,但不代表你就可以直接放弃练习。

 

毕竟在2020年下半年的考试中,曾在1个月内出现两次报告类话题,所以大家千万不能忽视这种类型的题目。否则一旦在考场上遇到这种题,你可能就会面临大脑一片空白、额头直冒冷汗、什么也写不出来的窘境图片

 

为了让大家能够更充分准备好雅思考试,下面小编就来给大家介绍一下,在考场遇到报告类题目,应该怎样快速形成自己的写作框架!

 

报告类题目写作框架

典型报告类题目,都会给你列举一个社会问题,并问你引起该问题的原因是什么,以及带来的影响/解决的方案是什么。

 

图片举个例子,2019年5月曾出现过的大作文题目如下:

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this case? (原因)How should these children or teenagers be punished?(解决方案)

 

首先在审题上就要明确,文章主体段最起码要有两段——一段分析原因,一段展示可能出现的影响/可以解决的方案。再加上前面引入和后面结尾,一般来说报告类话题写作可以分为四大段↓

 

● 开头段——改写题目+表明观点(表明接下来要写原因及原因数量)。

● 主体段1——给出问题产生的原因。这里至少要提供2点及以上的原因,只有1点会使文章整体太单薄。一般来说,2-3个原因比较好,也方便后面对原因带来的影响或针对原因提供的解决方案展开论述。

● 主体段2——就上述原因带来的影响或解决方案展开描述。跟原因一样,最好有2-3个观点。

● 结尾段——总结文章内容,简要概括原因及影响/方案。但这里不能直接复制主体段内容,也要进行改写并升华。

 

看完该怎么形成自己框架后,下面就以一道雅思考场上真实出现过的题目为例,给大家具体讲讲应该如何展开论述~

 

报告类题目写作范文及解析

题目

Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

 

解析思路

首先锁定这是一道典型报告类题目,属于“原因-方案”类,立刻在脑海形成四个大段:

 

开头段:改写题目,阐述话题的重要性

 

The problems associated with anti-social behaviour and disrespects for others have drawn constant attention in recent decades. For this reason, a great deal of research has focused on factors triggering these behaviours and provides keys for prevention and treatment. (改写题目)This essay is to analyse the dominant cause of social behaviour disorders, as well as feasible solutions to mitigate the situation.(表明后面会阐述原因和解决方案)

 

主体一段:提出父母对子女的教育是造成这种现象的主要原因,有的家庭对孩子的惩罚过重导致他们叛逆并走向冷漠和极端;现代家庭中的父母忙于工作无暇照顾孩子的情感,他们往往被电视和网络中的暴力或犯罪节目影响到。

 

Parenting seems to be the main reason contributing to this phenomenon. (原因1)In some families, parents utilize rigid disciplines and heavy punishment to control behaviours instead of teaching children how to correct their mistakes, which creates rebellious people inclined to be indifferent and risk-taking. (原因1解释) In other cases, as modern parents are becoming occupied with their jobs, they may fail to meet children's physical and emotional needs.(原因1解释) Most children are susceptible to prevalent media like TV and the Internet, watching programs full of violent activities and crimes. (原因2)As young children cannot distinguish between right and wrong, ill-mannered attitudes may emerge and develop without being controlled.  

 

主体二段:有些措施可以缓和这种问题,例如家长援助组织可以帮助家长们用正确的方式教育孩子,提供相应资源和信息;地方当局也可以根据事件的本质和严重程度进行早期的干预,让人们处于安全的环境之中,远离困扰。

 

Accordingly, some effective measures could alleviate the detrimental influence on a large scale. (解决方案总起句)First and foremost, parent support groups could provide resources and information for parents to educate their children, helping to build upon families' strengths so that children can thrive socially and behaviourally.(解决方案1,对应原因1) In addition, local authorities could take early interventions on occurrences of anti-social behaviours, encouraging young people to stay safe and keep out of trouble. For example, mediation is a common practice employed for people involved in the case by discussing the problems and agreeing on a solution afterwards.(解决方案2,对应原因2)

 

总结:总结观点 + 简单解释说明

To conclude, anti-social performances and disrespectful attitudes towards others stem from inappropriate parenting education. (原因总结概括)When it comes to tackling them, parent support and early intervention should be applied to ensure a safe environment where people show consideration for each other and behave acceptably.(解决方案总结概括)

 

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