Some said teachers' main role is to transmit the information. Nowadays students are exposed to many kinds of information, so the role of the teacher will not work in modern life education. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
题目大意
一些人认为老师的主要角色是传输信息。现在学生直面各种各样的信息，所以老师在当今时代将没有作用。你同意还是不同意。
思路解析
这是一道观点类大作文，观点类的题目一般都会由前提、“因”和“果”（结论）构成。因此在赞不赞同的时候，我们先看前提和结论有没有问题，再看因果两者之间是否构成逻辑关系。
这道题目的观点我们是反对的。问题点有两个，一是前提错误，二是因果不构成逻辑关系。
“Some said teachers' main role is to transmit the information”这是观点的前提：老师的主要角色是传输信息。
这个前提假设就是错误的，大家一定听过一句话“师者，所以传道受业解惑也。”（出自韩愈《师说》）。老师的职能本身就不仅仅信息传输信息那么简单，这种想法是狭隘的。老师的职能可以概括为两方面，一是教授各类知识，二是帮助学生树立是非观念和人生价值观。
教授知识不仅仅是信息传输，纯粹的的信息传输是不用在意学生到底有没有理解信息或掌握如何运用知识点。但老师教授的过程中，除了信息传输外，是需要确保学生能够掌握知识，并且针对学生的疑问进行解答。此外，作为学生能够接触时间最多的人之一，老师本身的行为会影响到学生。在接触过程中，老师能够教会学生辨别是非并建立正确的观念，而这些观念可能会对孩子未来产生重要影响。
我们在明确前提的错误后，其实也能发现“因果逻辑”的错误。学生只是直面各种信息，但是如果信息量很大，学生没有掌握整合和筛选能力的话，并不知道哪些知识是适合的或者有益的，盲目的接受是没有意义的，而不良信息的也会对学生造成负面影响，因此需要老师的进行筛选、引导并教会辨别的方法。
高分范文示例
Despite the fact that the world is undergoing various changes, education remains one of the most heatedly discussed issues, especially with the advent of Internet. Moreover, there even exist some people who argue that teachers may actually be useless in the future because some people believe that the only role of teachers is to instill knowledge but students are in the exposure of abundant information through the Internet since childhood. Personally, I believe that teachers are irreplaceable.
First of all, those who support this idea don't really know what a teacher means. In fact, the functions of teachers are diversified. For example, compared with online learning, the exchanges of emotions and feelings between students and teachers can be realized efficiently through face-to-face communication. In fact, apart from imparting knowledge, it is also the responsibility of the teachers to encourage and inspire students by sharing their own life experience. Therefore, not only can teachers play the role of knowledge base, but they can also serve as role models who guide students throughout their lives.
Moreover, during autonomous learning, the teachers' role should not be ignored. Currently, although people have entered an era of information explosion, it is interesting to notice that the knowledge level of general people has not been qualitatively enhanced, and the reason behind is quite simple. In fact, in the face of such a large amount of information, people do not know how to effectively select the appropriate information, let alone reorganize it into a knowledge system or a framework of curriculum. Worse still, some students are misled by the untruthfulness and even deception of network information due to lack of experience. Therefore, the role of teachers becomes particularly crucial as they can give students correct guidance according to the curriculum system and authoritative teaching materials developed by experts, so that students can make enormous progress in a short time.
To sum up, in spite of the huge amount of information available on the Internet, I am still convinced of the indispensable role of human teachers mainly because of the the emotional exchanges and necessary guidance which are made possible by talking and training face-to-face.
相关词汇和语法结构
Instill 灌输
Irreplaceable 不可取代的
Knowledge base 知识基础
Impart 灌输
autonomous learning 自主学习
Throughout 在……期间
Emotional exchange 情感交流
Information explosion 信息爆炸
Untruthfulness不可信
Deception 欺骗
qualitatively 质的
Framework 框架
Curriculum 课程
Authoritative 权威的
Convince 信息
Indispensable 不可或缺的
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