嗨，亲爱的们，今天重庆新航道的小编要给大家分享的是怎样让你托福写作的句子简洁而优美，下面我们就一起来看看吧。
好的写作，首先而且至关重要的一点就是简洁。用最准确的单词、短语去表达，繁冗的写作反而减弱表述的清晰度，新托福需要的就是实用+准确。在托福的指南中指出，明明一两句话就能概括出的话却一味的套用句式、堆砌了许多无用的词藻是会大大减分的，同时很浪费宝贵的考试时间。
比较下面这些句子，注意体会二者的差别及效果。
Wordy:It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week.
Better:It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week.
Wordy:It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the Chinese people.
Better:Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese.
Wordy:He has no sense of principles, whether he is in public or in private.
Better:He has no principles, public or private.
Wordy:Whenever anyone telephoned her to ask her for help with their homework she always obliged right away.
Better:She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework.
Wordy:If the government agency finds that an individual has received a payment to which the individual was not entitled, whether or not the payment was due to the individual's fault or misrepresentation, the individual shall be liable to repay to the government the total sum of the payment to which the individual was not entitled.
Better:If the government agency finds that you received a payment that you weren't entitled to, you must pay the entire sum back.
Wordy:Another important aspect is good health. It is one of our great blessings. It may be achieved through proper diet and exercise. Rest is also desirable.
Better:The great blessing of good health may be had through proper diet, exercise, and rest.
词语简化的一些技巧
用介词替代从句
Wordy:When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
Better:At the second traffic light turn left.
用短语替代从句
Wordy:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.
Better:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.
用否定意义的词代替no 或 not
Wordy: college students who do not have sufficient financial backing ……
Better: college students who lacks sufficient financial backing……
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