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雅思高分作文分享:教育类话题

作者: 2021-02-22 14:25 来源:重庆编辑
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大作文题目

Parents should encourage children to spend less time on studying and more time on doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


写作思路

孩子是否应该花更多时间参加体育活动?通常大家都会赞成这个观点,因为参加体育活动有利于孩子的身心健康。现在很多孩子出现了各种健康问题,比如肥胖、近视等等,所以需要改变久坐的习惯,锻炼身体,增强体质。此外,锻炼身体还能够改善情绪,缓解压力。锻炼身体可能会占用学习时间,但是反过来,孩子的健康水平提高以后,能够有更充沛的精力去学习,能够带来更高的学习效率。

 

重点词汇与语料

declining health                 健康变差

participate in                     参加

sedentary activities             久坐的活动

weight gain                       增重

nearsightedness                  近视

take part in                        参加

on sick leave                     休病假

relieve stress                     缓解压力

reduce anxiety                     减轻焦虑

release negative emotions         释放负面情绪

chemical substances               化学物质  

facilitate                           促进

 

参考范文

Some people believe that parents should encourage children to do more physical exercise, even though this possibly means less time spent on studies. Considering the declining health of many students, I agree with this opinion.     

 

Undoubtedly, children should participate in more sports activities to improve their physical health. Lack of exercise is causing a series of health problems to children. Spending too much time on sedentary activities such as reading books and watching movies on electronic devices leads to weight gain and nearsightedness. Not getting enough exercise also affects the normal growth of children’s bones and muscles. Only by encouraging children to take part in sports activities can these problems be avoided. This will occupy some time that can otherwise be spent on children’s study, but the benefits of exercise are obvious. Good health can guarantee that students have sufficient energy for their studies and will not be absent from class on sick leave.

 

In addition, doing physical exercise is an effective way to relieve emotional stress that arises from continuous study. Many children are experiencing anxiety because of busy schedules in school and loads of assignments. If they could take a break by playing basketball or running a few laps in their spare time, they would be able to reduce their anxiety and release their negative emotions. In the process of doing exercise, their bodies can produce some chemical substances that make them happy and relaxed. When they return to study, higher efficiency can be achieved.   

 

Overall, doing physical activities is important to children’s health and if arranged properly, it can also facilitate children’s study.

 

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