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题目来源：2020年9月27日大陆雅思大作文
An increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgeries. Why people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
题目大意
整容的人越来越多？原因是什么？积极还是消极现象？
思路解析
这道题目包含2部分：
1）整容热的原因；
2）这一现象的利弊
先说文章结构，根据问什么答什么的原则，就是2个主体段分别回应2个部分；主体段-1分析原因；主体段-2分析利弊；
找原因思路：一个现象能普及，可以从两个角度考虑，一是有需求，而是执行上没困难；
分析利弊思路：选择利弊均等，能体现出我们分析的完整性和合理性；具体内容可以把这所讨论现象所涉及到的因素细化（如经济方面，生活，文化，情感等），在不同方面尝试找出不同内容
高分写作示范:
The is a phenomenon that cosmetic operations have become increasingly commonplace today. While each individual may have disparate reasons to alter his or her appearance, I tend to attribute this fad to media influences and technology breakthroughs. And the cosmetic frenzy could be both a blessing and a curse.
In order to establish a relationship between the vanity beauty faddism and the world we live in today, we must first identify two key elements that influences our daily lives – media and technology. Given the ubiquitous advertising that dominates The Information Age, younger generations have been weaned on advertisements that induce them to pursue perfection in all aspects of their lives – to change the way they look stands out as a key pursuit. But only temptation is not enough, what effectuates the cosmetic trend is the advanced technology, which reduces the cost of surgeries, thus making the once-luxurious service affordable to the populace.
When it comes to the pros and cons of the prevailing vanity beauty surgeries, I would say the effect is twofold depending on how we view this phenomenon. For advocates, of particular significance is the economic return, whether it be job opportunities generated by the business or the contribution to tax and even to tourism – one convincing example is South Korea, whose cosmetic industry acts as a magnet for millions of tourists. Not to be left behind is the increased self-esteem after the look of individuals improved, which benefit job hunters in service and beauty industries. For the opponents, however, what concerns them is the risk of the surgery, given the avalanche of new practitioners in the nascent business - research evidences show a surge in medical accidents in relation to cosmetic operations in the past decade.
It is my conclusion therefore, people’s bias for cosmetic surgeries is the result of media hype and technology advances, and this trend has both positive and negative effects.
相关词汇和语法结构
Frenzy 狂热
Blessing 赐福
Curse 诅咒
Vanity beauty 整容
Faddism 时尚
Ubiquitous 无处不在的
Wean on 影响
Perfection 完美
Luxurious 的
Affordable 买得起的
Twofold 两面的
Self-esteem 自尊自信
Avalanche 大量涌入，猛增
Nascent 新兴的
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