叮~今天雅思写作练习时间到了,今天的话题是:增加运动设施。一起来拿笔“开动”吧!
题目
Some people say that the best way to improve the public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
开头段
A problem of modern societies is the declining level of现代社会的一个问题是...的下降 health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend关于如何解决这个令人担忧的问题有争议的观点.
One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle提倡运动的生活方式.
主体段一
Advocates of this believe that支持者认为 today’s sedentary lifestyle久坐的生活方式 and stressful working conditions压力大的工作 mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time.
If there were easy-to-reach容易获得的 local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen摊在屏幕前 every evening.
The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for满足 ages, levels of fitness and interests; those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch足球场.
主体段二
However, there may be better ways of tackling this problem解决这个问题也有更好的措施.
Interest in sports is not universal普遍的, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them.
Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example, by installing exercise equipment健身器材 in parks, as my local council has done.
This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to培养积极态度 exercise at an early age.
As well as physical activity, high tax penalties重税罚 could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption过度消耗 of any of these contributes to导致 poor health.
Even improving public transport would help; it takes longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.
结尾段
In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach太小狭隘的措施 and would not have the desired想要的 results.
People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle过更健康的生活 in general.
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