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托福机经分享:2020年7月11日托福写作真题分享

作者: 2020-07-20 17:11 来源:重庆编辑
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2020年7月11日托福独立写作(重复2019年12月7日)真题:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Moves and television programs should present stories that good people should be rewarded and bad people should be punished。

一、Introduction

1、宜短、宜节奏快。

2、忌弯弯绕,忌洋洋洒洒,忌拖沓。

Movies and TV shows hold sway over viewers’ idea about the world and their values. Those productions should therefore promote what is right; otherwise, there may be confusion, anxiety or fear widespread among the public, and that would be dangerous.

二、Body

1、宜讨论充分,宜论证方式多样。

2、忌寡讲大道理。

When teenage viewers witnessed, in many superhero movies, that a vigilante was unwelcome as misunderstood, they  must be desperately anxious. It must be perplexing that the hero who should receive tremendous applause can be be abandoned. It is not until the end of the story when people finally appreciate the hero’s intents and deeds that the teenage viewers feel safe, settle down, and have faith in the values that has been instilled in them. Good people being recognized and rewarded with praise is therefore critical to the development of adolescents, whose worldview is in the vital formative years, and during the years, the young people should not be disappointed.

解读:

1、以上是一个长篇幅的段落。

2、尤其值得注意的是,这个段落是以例子引出道理(而不是古板的讲道理后举例子)。在例子讲述完毕的时候,道理的内容以总结的方式出现。

It is believe that all humans have the criminal genes, and they may be unrestrained when TV or movies send the message that justice is sometimes absent. Also, when people are told that rewards are not the necessary result of their kind heart or good character, they may become apathetic about others. I have seen some TV shows in which bad people escape from the punishment and good people wind up with a grave loss, and I could not stop worrying that people would misconceive of the world as a flawed system that they can take advantage of. Or they may simply lose their confidence in the system. By contrast, I have no such worries when I watch American or Chinese TV or movies, in which good people always defeat bad ones.

解读:

1、再一个长篇幅的段落,文章的主体部分的讨论就足够充分了。

2、这个段落是以经典的讲道理后举例子的方式展开。

三、Conclusion

1、宜话少,宜浮光掠影,可谨慎升华。

2、忌过分重复前面说过的内容。

TV or movie producers must be careful with what they present.  Although the cliché that good people should be rewarded and the bad ones should be punished feels boring, moral correctness is certainly desirable.

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