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在托福考试中,如何利用语法结构丰富作文的内容?

作者: 2022-01-29 17:17 来源:重庆编辑
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正在准备托福考试的同学们,写作文的时候还只会那么几句话吗?航航为大家整理了一些丰富作文内容的方法,一起来看看吧。

 

6个选择运用语法结构的参考原则

 

1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:

 

The situation that resulted in my grandfather’s not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

 

从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather’s not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:

 

My grandfather couldn’t study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

 

2. 避免频繁使用“there be”结构,例如下面的句子:

 

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

 

可以改为:My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

 

更简洁的句式为:

 

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

 

3. 把从句改为短语或单词。例如:

 

Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

 

简介的表达方式为:

 

The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

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4. 仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。例如:

 

In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather’s family.

 

本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather’s family”,而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:

 

In the fall, my grandfather’s family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

 

5. 用更为准确的一个动词来代替动词短语,例如下面这句话:

 

My grandfather didn’t have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

 

Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:

 

My grandfather didn’t have time to loiter with his school friends.

 

6. 有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达,例如:

 

Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

 

两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:

 

Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.

 

以上就是如何利用语法结构丰富作文内容的实例讲解啦,可学习借鉴哦~

 

 

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