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20211123托福独立写作范文分享:养宠物可以培养孩子责任感嘛?

作者: 2021-12-12 16:02 来源:重庆编辑
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to have the children care for an animal.

 

这是一道绝dui词题目。对于绝dui词题目来说,基本的答题逻辑是一样的。一般来说,写不同意要容易一些。如果选择不同意,那么要先让步,承认养宠物的合理性,然后再提出更好的解决方案来批驳绝dui性。如果选择同意,证明养宠物是最好的方式是比较难的,所以可以选择证明养宠物是一个好的培养孩子责任感的方式。

 

下面我们来看这道题目的思路:

如果选择不同意:

1. 承认养宠物是培养孩子责任感的好方式(让步),但并不是最好的方式

2. 做家务是培养孩子责任感更好的方式

3. 参加团体运动是培养责任感更好的方式

 

如果选择同意:

1. 养宠物可以让孩子认识到自己的角色和责任

2. 养宠物可以让孩子学会做事情不能虎头蛇尾

3. 养宠物可以让孩子学会交代的事情一定要做完

(注:这几条思路还是比较相似的,所以建议选择不同意)

 


下面我们来看这道题目的范文:

Being responsible is important to people, since nobody would like to hang out or work with irresponsible people. Although everyone agrees with the significance of responsibility, they tend to have different ideas about how to make children more responsible. Some suggest that children should be encouraged to keep pets, which they believe is the best way to learn responsibility. However, from my perspective, caring for an animal is not the best way to learn responsibility.

 

Admittedly, caring for an animal can help children be more responsible to some extent. It is because when children take care of their own pets, they will learn their role and their responsibility. For example, a child may have a dog. At first, he is very excited, as a dog is a new thing to him. So he is willing to spend lots of time feeding, playing with, and walking the dog. He may even clean the dog poop. However, after a few weeks, he may grow tired and stop doing all of those things. Then his mother may be upset with him and tell him that he has to take care of his dog. Thus he may be forced by his mother to feed and walk his dog. Gradually, he would realize that he is his dog’s master and he has the responsibility to take care of the dog, which means he will be more responsible. However, to argue that keeping pets is the best way to learn responsibility is not right, since there are other more important ways, such as doing household chores and joining sports teams.

 

For one thing, doing household chores can better help children learn. Though keeping pets is a good way, it also has problems, since usually a large quantity of parasites live on pets. Therefore, spending a long time with them may potentially put children in danger of infection. In contrast, doing household chores will not have this problem. This is because children can do some easy household chores, such as making beds, folding clothes and so on. Even though they have to do something that is a little bit dangerous, they can wear something to protect themselves. For example, they can wear a mask when sweeping floor, so that they will not breathe the dust in; they can wear a pair of gloves while washing dishes, in order that the detergent will not hurt their hands. In this way, they will not only learn responsibility, but also stay safe.

 

For another, joining sports teams is also a better way. When children join a sports team, they will surely learn to play their position. For example, if a child joins a basketball club, he will learn to play his role. For instance, if he is a point guard, he is supposed to grab the ball and pass the ball to other team members to get the point, instead of shooting the ball himself, even though shooting the ball is usually the most eye-catching behavior. Thus he can learn to be responsible in the sports team. Meanwhile, while learning responsibility, he could also maintain a good body shape, as playing basketball involves a lot of jumping and running which will burn the extra calories and increase muscle mass. On the contrary, keeping pets doesn’t really require much exercise. Even walking the dog can’t be compared with the running and jumping in playing all kinds of sports. Therefore, joining a sports team is surely a better way.

 

To sum up, keeping pets is not the best way to learn responsibility for children.

 

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