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托福写作——如何“凤头”式开篇

作者: 2020-04-30 16:48 来源:重庆编辑
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好的开头是吸引考官的关键。批改老师面对很多考卷,每个学生的题都不可能仔细阅读,这样的话就需要我们把自己文章的开头写好,这样你的作文可能才有一个好的分数。今天新航道小编就为大家讲讲托福独立写作的如何写好开头。

在写独立写作的开头段要遵循3要素:论点、 论证、自己的观点

论点的写作方法就是需要让大家知道这个话题为什么会出现在这里是什么让这个话题具有一定的讨论价值。

1:Students in the future can have the choice to learn at home using high-tech innovations, like TV or internet .Do you think they will still attend traditional schools?

2:TV advertising directed towards children (aged from 2 to 5) should not be allowed.

1中关于将来学生是不是在传统的教室里上课,这一题和科技发展有关系。因此这一题的introduction部分可以这样思考:社会快速发展、新科技不断出现这给人们生活的方方面面都带来了一些影响,其中的影响就是改变了学生们的上课方式.......

2中这一题是在说针对于2致5岁的孩子的电脑广告应该被禁止,从背景上考虑这一题是可以从科技发展的方向入手:社会的快速发展离不开大众媒体的传播其中广告作为一种最常见的传播形式给人们的生活带来很大的影响,那么针对于2-5岁孩子的广告是不是允许传播....

那么关于论点,一共有2种常用形式:背景引入式&主题重申式

 背景引入式的开头结构:

 结合题目引入背景自然过渡到话题上,最后明确表达立场

 例题:Students in the future can have the choice to learn at home using high-tech innovations, like TV or internet. Do you thi nk they will still attend traditional schools?

 开头• We live in a technology world in which technology gives us many opportunities to improve every aspect of our lives. • One of the most obvious impacts which the technology has on education is that it has changed traditional studying-in-class learning pattern.(引入背景) • Now we get the chance to study at home by using technology such as computer or television.(过渡到话题) • This new learning pattern, which I strongly recommend to everyone(明确立场), will save a lot of time spent on the traveling between schools and living spots, moreover learners can arrange their time schedule flexibly.(transition 过渡)

 主题重申式又称为题目改写,此种方式的开头结构:

 改写题目然后明确表达立场

 例题:Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.

开头• There are basically two types of classes in universities, classes where teachers lecture and that where the students do some of the talking. Some students prefer the class in which they can talk because they believe the exchange between teachers and students promotes learning; others will prefer lectures which will deliver far more information to students(改写题目). • I prefer the former approach although both teaching and learning approaches are valuable and have relative merits.(明确立场) My reasons are listed below.(transition,过渡)

上述开头方式虽然明确的表达了观点但是整段读起来会比教啰嗦,因此下面介绍一种题目重申版,结构同样是改写题目、明确表达立场但是题目改写会非常简洁奥。

例题:Because the world is changing so quickly , peo ple now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.

开头段:As the society developing rapidly, we can hear such voices sometimes in our life that the modern society makes people morbid and peo ple should retrieve their past life.(改写题目) However as far as I am concerned, the overall modern life has virtually made people more del ighted than before.(明确立场)的综合报导与评论。代表洛克菲勒财团的利益,发行量达300万份。

以上就是新航道重庆小编给大家分享的关于托福的相关内容。如果大家想要了解更多或者有任何疑问,欢迎联系新航道重庆学校

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