4001859090

托福作文“善恶终有其时,你同意吗?”

作者: 2019-12-17 11:24 来源:重庆编辑
收藏

 在托福写作中,也不时出现一些哲理思辨性内容的写作。也许这个问题对于我们来说是理所当然的,就好比如人们常说的:“善有善报,恶有恶报。”但是这句话是否有值得我们怀疑的地方呢?在电视剧和电影里,每次的大结局都是作恶的人都得到了他应有的惩罚,但现实生活中可比电影和电视剧来得复杂得多了,有的善良的人也没有多好的结局,仍是疾病缠身。所以,那些我们自古以来就认为是对的话,就真的是对的吗?这值得我们去深究。今天,重庆新航道的小编就来给大家分享一下12月7日托福写作真题。

  “Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Movies and television programs should present stories that good people should be rewarded and bad people should be punished.”

托福12月7日写作真题分享:善恶终有其时,你同意吗?.png

  写作范文

  论证思路:

  * Right moral values are important for teenage viewers, who are in the formative years, they are also important for adults, many of whom have lost their confidence in the system.

  * Movies and television programs serve to promote the right values and strengthen people’s faith in the society.

  * TV producers and film makers may be under that pressure that the viewers want to see the moral edification.

  ☟☟☟

  Introduction

  少废话:

  Viewers can be swayed by what they see in movies and TV programs. It is therefore important that those productions promote what is right; otherwise, people may generate feelings like anxiety and confusion.

  Body

  First, right moral values are important for teenage viewers, who are in theformative years. 典型的展开结构,中心句后简单解释: Since their worldview is still developing and forming, adolescent viewers need the absoluterighteousness, which may be an idealistic idea yet the core of good values.论证技巧:正说后反说: They would otherwise be confused or even go astray. 典型的展开结构,讲完道理举例子: For example, a few years ago, when I saw, in the movie, that Spiderman was unwelcome by the citizens of New York City, I was baffled as to why such a good person who should have deserved tremendous applause would be abandoned. It was not until the end of the story when people finally appreciated his good intents and deeds that I stopped being perplexed by the story. The happy ending was critical to the formation of my worldview as a young man, as my confusion was dispelled. The story eventually confirmed the values I had been instilled from my family and education.

  ← 段落也要有篇幅区分 →

  Meanwhile, the right values are important for adults, many of whom have lost their confidence in the system. Such movies and TV are there scue those adults need. ← 中心句可以被拆成两句来说。论证技巧:跳过解释,直接举例子,以例子来诠释道理: This actually happens often. ← 引出例子的(套话性质的)小短句。 There are realities where good people are not fairly treated, and some adult people may feel disappointed and doubtful about the system. Fortunately, when they watch such movies and TV, they can retrieve their faith in society.

  In addition, not only viewers but also TV producers and film makers need such movies and TV programs. For those producers, as they may be aware of viewers’ need for the moral edification, they should feel urged to make such films and TV. Some producers, probably in pursuit of unconventional artistic value, have used plots that are contrary to the general principle and values that good people are rewarded and the bad punished, and ended up with receiving intense rejection. This the opposite case is the lesson. In fact, in China and the US, few← 措辞技巧:不在动词处否定,而在名词处否定。successful productions, whose number is colossal, and their producers disobey or deviate from the mainstream values. ← 看出来最后一句其实是例子吧。

  Conclusion

  以上就是小编今天给大家分享的一期托福写作真题解析及范文,看完这个题目,小编决定再去查一查关于“善有善报,恶有恶报”的相关论述,我认为这不能完全同意,希望大家可以提出不同的观点出来,而不是一味地去认同,但是,我们可以理解的是,电影和电视剧具有引导性质的,还是主要向我们观众传达积极正能量的价值观,所以在电视剧电影中总是善有善报、恶有恶报。如果大家想要了解更多托福真题、托福备考资料、托福相关课程,或者有任何疑问,欢迎联系新航道重庆学校。

 

新航道重庆学校官网:https://cq.xhd.cn/

新航道重庆学校咨询热线:400-185-9090

 


姓名
电话
  • 品牌简介
  • 课程中心
  • 留学服务
  • 校区地图
  • 精品项目
  • 活动专区
热门活动

注册/登录

+86
获取验证码

登录

+86

收不到验证码?

知道了

找回密码

+86
获取验证码
下一步

重新设置密码

为您的账号设置一个新密码

保存新密码

密码重置成功

请妥善保存您的密码
立即登录

为了确保您的帐号安全

请勿将帐号信息提供给他人/机构