考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题，但因为缺乏有效批改，就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来分享一些来自托福讲师针对独立口语话题学生答案的专业批改。
本期托福独立口语话题
Which of the following job do you think should be paid the most:
1. doctors
2. teachers
3. police officer?
托福独立口语参考范文
Although teachers and police officers are also quite important for the whole society, I still believe that doctors deserve the highest salaries.
First, it takes a lot of time and money to be a doctor. To get fully prepared, medical students need to take almost 15 years to acquire the basic knowledge and practical skills both at school and in the hospital, not to mention the high tuition fees. So doctors should be paid the most to cover the cost.
Besides, doctors often have little time to spend with their families, while earning a good salary allows them to use the money to compensate their families and thus they can be more concentrated on their own jobs.
托福口独立语模板分析
说一下本题的几个常见错误发音：
1. although 的th不要忘记咬舌，而且不要乱加r。
2. society 很多人都读成了socierty，喜欢在/ə/ 后边加r，这个发音是错误的，要注意，类似的还有：campus, delicious,famous, tedious都会有这个问题，需要引起重视。
3. almost 注意不要读成alr most(很多同学会在l的尾音后边加r)类似的还有：also, always, altogether, cool，注意都不要加r
4. 同理：medical, practical 不要在cal后边多了r
5. police，务必和politics分开：politics重音在第1音节/'pɒlətɪks/，police重音在第二音节/pə'liːs/ 且o的发音不同。同时，和please分开：police的p后边有元音/pɒ/，please/pliːz/的p后边没有任何元音，只是单纯的轻辅音，请不要受汉语拼音的影响。
6. officer /ˈɒfisə(r)/重音在第1音节，要跟official/ə'fɪʃ(ə)l/ (重音在第二音节)区分开，而且official的cial不要乱加r。
7. deserve 这个词的s发的是z的音，音标是/dɪ'zɜː(r)v/
8. doctor不要吞c，否则就成了daughter了。
9. own 不要吞n这个鼻音，容易被大家发成owe，也要发音准确。
一些实用表达方式整理
1. deserve the highest salary
值得被给予高的工资 (deserve sth.)后边还提到：deserve to be paid the most 一样的意思，不一样的用法(deserve to do sth.)
2. it takes a lot of time and money to do sth.
做某事花费很多时间。(前面的it是形式主语，最后的to do sth.才是真正的主语。这里请注意：to do 不定式或者that引导的主语从句可以做真正主语，但是doing sth.不可以!比如：It takes a lot of time and money doing sth.就不行)
3. not to mention的用法
“更不用说”，这个词组后边只能接名词/名词性质的词组，如果你想要接句子，还是需要这么说才行：not to mention the fact that...加同位语从句即可。
4. have little time to do sth.
没有时间做某事，就相当于：have no time to do sth.这里的little其实就是一个否定词，几乎没有=没有。类似的还有few，不过这个词的特点是要接可数名词，而且是可数名词的复数形式。比如：路上几乎没有车。There are few cars on the road. 不可以不加s。
5. be concentrated on sth.
集中精力做某事。大家还可以说be focused on sth.或者concentrate one's efforts/ attention / energy / mind on sth. 也可以说make a concentrated effort to do sth.
托福独立口语参考答案分享
Although teachers and police officers are also quite important for the whole society, I still believe that doctors deserve the highest salaries.
First, it takes a lot of time and money to be a doctor. To get fully prepared, medical students need to take almost 15 years to acquire the basic knowledge and practical skills both at school and in the hospital, not to mention the high tuition fees. So doctors should be paid the most to cover the cost.
Besides, doctors often have little time to spend with their families, while earning a good salary allows them to use the money to compensate their families and thus they can be more concentrated on their own jobs.
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