考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题，但因为缺乏有效批改，就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来分享一些来自托福讲师针对独立口语话题学生答案的专业批改。
本期托福独立口语话题
Describe a person whom you would like to turn to for advice.
学生对此话题的表述答案
Someone from whom I'd like to turn to ask for help is my best friend Mary because she is such a calm person that she never lose temper. In stark contrast whenever I encounter difficulties, I'm too emotional to figure out how to get things done. For example, last week, I was overwhelmed by mountains of the assignment. So I turned to Marry for help. And she firstly calmed me down and then helped me to list all assignment and to give priority to them. So I could efficiently get my assignments done step by step. So that's the reason I turn for Mary for help.
讲师批改意见
语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)
1 never lose temper————never loses her temper
2 mountains of assignment————moutains of assignments
3 helped me to list————helped me list
表达部分存在的问题(Expression)
1 so…and…so (break the sentence)
2 firstly————first
3 all assignment————all of my assignments
4 turn for————turn to
此话题高分口语模板分享
Someone from whom I'd like to ask for help is my best friend Mary, because she is such a calm person that she never loses her temper. In stark contrast, whenever I encounter difficulties, I'm too emotional to figure out how to get things done. For example, last week I was overwhelmed by mountains of assignments. So I turned to Marry for help. She first calmed me down and then helped me list all of my assignments and give priority to them. This way I could efficiently get my assignments done step by step. That's why I turned for Mary for help.
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