考生在备考独立口语时可能练习了不少口语话题，但因为缺乏有效批改，就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来分享一些对独立口语话题学生答案的批改，希望对大家有所帮助。
本期托福独立口语话题
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
18-year-old adults are not mature enough to vote.
托福独立口语参考范文
Well, I think there are several ways to keep myself healthy.
In my opinion, 18-year-old people already have the ability to vote. Firstly, because I think when we are 18, we are adults, which means we can take responsibility for our behaviors and actions. (At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions.) And also I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country and they have the ability to reason and also enough knowledge about politics, which will help them to make right decisions. For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about the information related to national policies. And our politics teachers always tell us not to just repeat what others say but think by ourselves. So we are mature enough to vote.
托福独立口语模板分析
在此，说一下本题的几个常见错误发音：
adult 这个音是/ˈædʌlt/ 或者 /ə'dʌlt/ (注意，a这个原音发音不同的时候，重音是不一样的）
mature 这个音是/mə'tʃʊər/ 前面不是/ma/是/mə/。
一些细节解读分析
1. 18 years old≠18岁的人
I think +people who are already 18 years old are mature enough to vot
18岁的人，正确的说法如下：
A. 18-year-old people 【作定语，通常都是这样，加了连字符，就成了形容词。比如：在校的活动 on-campus activities】
B. people who are 18 【作表语】
C. people who are 18 years old 【作表语】
2. 我们能够对“我们的”行为负责 + behavior是不可数名词
we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions
3.concerned发音问题
I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country 这里的concerned，不要发成concered，中间那个n不要吞掉。这是考生经常会犯的错误。建议再练习一下environment和government，也要注意不要吞n。
4. 没有细节
1）语言考试并不是完全不看内容。大家要知道，语音确实加分，不过，内容也不容忽视。
2）增加细节和例子并不难，看下面示范
A. details 是把你说的事情具体化，如：we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions.我们能对自己的行为负责，具体化后：At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions.我们自己独立做决策，因此我们的选票能够代表自己的意见。
B. exemplification 是把你说的事情搞成一个具体的事件，如：young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country. 年轻人关心国家的未来。具体到一个例子：For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about the information related to national policies. 我和我的朋友，我们就成天看新闻。
托福独立口语参考答案分享
Well, I don't think I can agree with statement because I think +people who are already 18 years old are mature enough to vote
Firstly, because I think when we are 18, we are adults, which means we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions. (At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions)
And also I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country and they have the ability to reason and also enough knowledge about politics, which will help them to make right decisions.
For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about hte information related to national policies. And our politics teachers always tell me, "Please don't just repeat what others say but think by yourself, think critically." So I am pretty sure that we are mature enough to vote. So I am pretty sure that we have the capability to decide what is good for the nation and the people and thus we definitely are old enough to vote.
So I think they have both the right and capability to decide what is good for the nations and what is good for the people. So that's why I think they are old enough and mature enough to vote.
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