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考研英语写作分享:投诉信与建议信

作者: 2021-12-18 14:29 来源:重庆编辑
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一、投诉信

Directions:

You have recently returned from a trip. However, you were dissatisfied with the service you received at the hotel where you were visiting.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Give details of when you stayed, explain why you were unhappy with the service and say what you’d like to be done about it.

 

 

范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

I write to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received while staying at your hotel during my vacation between the 2nd and 11st of April this year.

Although your hotel is rated as a five-star one, I found that the rooms were not cleaned on a daily basis, and that my bed was made up only every three days. In addition, the food in the restaurant was similarly disappointing. Not only was it extremely overpriced, but the quality was very poor. I was therefore forced to have to eat out in the local restaurants.

I trust you will take my complaints seriously, and make every effort to improve your service in the future. I would greatly appreciate a discount on my bill (receipt enclosed). I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

                                            Yours sincerely,

                                             Li Ming

 

参考译文

尊敬的先生或女士:

今年4月2日至11日的假期期间我曾住在贵饭店。我写信是为了表达对于贵饭店服务的不满。

尽管贵饭店被评为五星级饭店,但我发现客房并非每天都有人打扫,我的床每三天才被整理一次。此外,餐厅的食物也同样令人失望。不但价格过高,而且质量很差。因此我被迫外出在当地饭店就餐。

我相信您会认真对待我的投诉,并会在将来尽力改善饭店的服务。您若给我的账单打个折扣(附上收据),我将非常感谢。期待您得便时尽早给我圆满的答复。

                                      您真诚的,

                                      李明

 

亮点表达

 

express表达

dissatisfaction不满

service服务

receive受到

hotel饭店

vacation假期

March三月

although尽管

rate评级

five star五星

clean清洁

on a daily basis每天

make up整理

in addition此外

restaurant饭店

similarly同样地

disappointing令人失望的

not only不但

extremely非常

overprice价格过高

quality质量

poor差

therefore因此

be forced to被迫

eat out外出就餐

local当地的

trust相信

complaint投诉

seriously认真地

make every effort to尽力

improve改进

in the future将来

greatly非常

discount折扣

bill账单

receipt收据

enclose附上

favorable圆满的

reply答复

at your earliest convenience尽快

 

句型拓展

1. We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.我们对您愿意补偿损失表示赞赏。

2. I wish to refer you to an incident which occurred in your restaurant, calling for some remedial actions.我想告知您发生在贵饭店的一件事,希望您采取一些补救措施。

3. I am writing to you in the hope that you could do me a favor to improve the horrible situation.我现在写信给您希望改进现状。

 

二、建议信

Directions:

Write an email to your university to suggest setting network cables in students’ dormitories.

 

范文

To Whom It May Concern,

As a student at our university, I should first commend you for the additional computers that you have recently added to the computer rooms. I am writing to you to request that the Internet be installed in the dormitories.

As you know, the Internet has become an increasingly important tool at university. Not only do professors require students to use it for research, but much communication is done between professors and students through email as well. In addition, some professors are beginning to post their lecture notes online for students to review in their spare time.

While there are a few computer labs with Internet access throughout campus, with over 20,000 students living in the dorms, there is a great need for more Internet access areas. Thank you for your time.

                                          Yours sincerely,

                                           Li Ming

 

参考译文

致有关人士:

作为本校的一名大学生,我首先很赞赏您最近为机房另外配置电脑的行动。我写信给您恳请在宿舍里安装互联网。

想必您也知道,互联网已经变成大学生活中很重要的一种工具。不仅教授们要求学生们使用网络进行科研调查,而且教授和学生间的很多沟通也是通过电子邮件完成的。此外,有些教授开始将自己的课堂讲义传到网上,供学生们在业余时间复习。

整个学校配备网络的机房数量不多,而住宿学生达两万多名,所以学生对更多网络的接入有很大的需求。谢谢您抽时间阅读我的邮件。

                                     您真诚的,

                                     李明

 

亮点表达

 

commend赞赏

additional另外的

computer电脑

recently近来

computer room机房

request恳请

Internet互联网

install安装

dormitory宿舍

World Wide Web互联网

increasingly越来越

tool工具

professor教授

require要求

research研究

communication联系

through通过

in addition此外

post张贴

lecture课堂

note笔记

review复习

lab实验室

access使用

throughout遍及

campus校园

over超过

dorm宿舍

 

佳句拓展

1.I am writing the letter to propose some conducive recommendations to you as regards your major.我写这封信是为了关于你的专业提出一些有用的建议。

2.I hope you find these proposals useful. 我希望您发现这些建议有用。

3.I trust you will take my suggestions into account. 我相信您会考虑我的建议。

 

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