托福独立写作次评分是E-rater, 它会检索考生写文章的拼写、语法小错误、单词的复杂程度以及短语地道性等。同时文章所用句型、语法的丰富以及难易程度也会纳入检索范围。一般来说,语法正确的基础上,所用到的语法结构越丰富、复杂,独立写作分数往往越高。但也在这里给大家提个醒,并不是说句子越复杂分数越高。英文作文里,有经验的写手,都会注重长短句交替,使文章有节奏感。所以,下面给大家分享几个非常实用的可以用于写因果逻辑关系的语法结构,请大家在操作过程中务必适可而止,点到为止。
我们以这个题目为例:
Some people believethatgoing toschool early in the morning is good for studentsstudy.Other students want to start a day late in the morning.Which opinion do you agree with and why?
我的观点:going to school early in the morning is good for studentsstudy.
分论点1.going to school early in the morning could boost studentsacademic performance.
原因:去的早学生可以有更多的时间复习功课/预习课程
结果:学的更扎实,考试成绩提升
Goingtoschool early in themorning could boost studentsacademic performance.Becausestudents could have moretime toreview andpreview lessons.So they can have a goodgraspof knowledgepointsandscore highin exams.
这本版本可能是一小部分同学会写到的。这个版本里面是存在语法问题的, because不能单独成句,引导原因状语从句, 所以这个版本里面Because.......lessons.这句话无主句。
tip 1.:写原因的时候, 不要直接Because后面写一句话结句。可以写This is because
尝试修改:
Going toschool early in the morning could boost studentsacademic performance.This is because students could have more time to review and preview lessons.So they can have a good grasp of knowledge points and score high in exams.
既然语法要多样,这个版本也不是最完美的。下面我们把原因和结果合为一句话,那原因到结果有哪些实用的语法结构呢?
tip 2:结果状语ing
基本结构:.··,.....(完整句子).., (adv.) doing......(注意此处的doing常见的应付考试的因果关系词:enable/allow/make it+adj.for sb todos th/导致v.)
尝试修改:
Goingto school early in themorning could boost studentsacademic performance.This is because students could havemoretimetoreviewandpreviewlessons(therefore/thus/thereby/effectively) enabling them to have a goodgrasp of knowledge points and score high in exams.
Tip 3:名词同位语+限制性定语从句
Goingtoschool early in the morning could boost studentsacademic performance.This is because studentscould havemoretimetoreviewandpreview lessons, [as ituation] (that helps them to have a goodgrasp of knowledge points and score high in exams.)
名词同位语?常用于应付考试的有:
phenomenon/practice/trend/development
本次先跟大家分享这两个语法知识:
1.ing结果状语
2.名词同位语+限制性定语从句
总结:除了简单的运用because和so来表示因果关系,或者运用其他明显的因果逻辑信号词,我们还可以运用语法结构,来表示隐性的因果关系。
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