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雅思写作考试真题及语料分析(干货)

作者: 2022-11-07 14:48 来源:重庆编辑
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  雅思写作考试如何利用真题进行备考?很多考生拿到写作真题资料,不知道怎么去利用,既浪费时间又耽搁了考试,下面重庆新航道雅思写作教研组老师为大家送上具体办法,全是干货,仅供参考。

  雅思写作Topic

  Some people believe that the best way to become successful in life is to get university education, while others disagree and think that nowadays this is no longer true.Discuss bothviews and giveyour ownopinion

  解析

  1.本题选自2022年1月8日者试直题,属于教育类话题:2022年教育类话题的老频为5/36(截止2022年10月31日中国大陆纸笔考试);

  2、考点:大学教育对成功的影响:

  3、难点:①大学教育对于成功的意义需要进行充分的论述

  ②题目中有词“thebestway”建议进行反驳:

  ③题目中的“nowadays”是一个时间限定,也需要紧扣这个限制条件。

  新航道June老师点评

  本题属于雅思写作的常规的题型DG类,双边讨论;常规的写法是分别赞同双方的观点并作出适中的结论:但此次题目中有极端词thebest,所以各位烤鸭们需要仔细审题,遇到词要记得反驳;对于“成功”这类抽象的词汇,需要加强细节化描写。

  4、类似的真题:2021年2月25日

  Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views andgiveyour opinion

  原文节选处1

  Working hard at getting a good education has long been seen as the right thing to do,because education is the keyto successBut why?Find out more here.

  Working hard at school and going on to further education or college has long been encouraged by parents and teachers for generationsas mostpeoplebelieveeducation is the key to success.

  Civil rights activist Martin Luther KingJr.once said“The function ofeducation is to teach one to think intensively and to thinkcriticallyIntelligence plus character-that is the goal oftrue education.”His words stillrine true todayEven ata high schoollevel students are encouraged to analyse textsnumbers and trends to allow them to see society in a new light.This broadens the mind and helps us to see the world afresh.But there are manyother fantasticreasonsthateducationisgoodforus-andmanyways in which it can be the key to professional success

  It helps you gain personal control of your life.You might not have been born into thelife you want to live forever.And that’s where education canhelpBygettingan education you give yourself the chance to change your life for the better.You might graduate and become a manager instead of an entry-level employee.You might become a CEO Or shareholder and take home profits at theend of the month instead ofjust a salary. Over time, your whole world can open up and newexciting personal and career opportunities can develop. University of the People offers lots of options to get educated at a university level.And as UoPeople is tuition-freecoming from a family that can’t sponsor your studiesis nota barriertogettingstarted

  It gives you the skills required for employment.As you progress through a college degree,you’ll learn how to manage your time; how to juggle several tasks at the same time and how to interact with all kinds of peoplefrom fellow students to professors andindustry professionalsThese skills are vital for the futureWhen you go into the

  workplace -or back into the workplace if youre a mature student -youll take a more carefully honed set of interpersonal and organisational skills with you.All of which will help you shine at work and cope with the challenges that the professional world throws at you.

  语料分析

  地道表达1:

  seethe worldafresh/thewholeworldcanopenupandnew/seesocietyinanewlight雅思写作/托福写作运用:Being educated can help students to see the world afresh/in a newlight可以替换常见的expandoneshorizons.

  新航道June老师点评

  很多雅思大作文的分论点都可以是做某某事/学某其技能有利干拓宽眼界,增长见识,增加经验。大家比较常见的表达一般是expandoneshorizons现在大家可以尝试多进行一些替换。在替换过程中,大家要注意雅思写作的词汇表达的要求,评分标准中要求灵活使用各种词汇,并多使用一些搭配collocations上文中就有很多地道的collocations地道表达2:

  take a more honed setofinterpersonaland organisational skills

  雅思写作/托福写作运用:Undergraduatescantakeamorehonedsetofinterpersonaland organisationalskills.可以替换常见的acquire/learn/developskills.地道表达3:

  help you shine at work and cope with thechallenges

  雅思写作/托福写作运用:University education can help students shine at work and cope withchallenges可以替换常见的benefitsb/sthisbeneficialto

  教育有利于成功的观点句:

  Manyargue that receiving higher education is the key to success sincestudents can see the world in a new light.

  原文节选处2

  Education and Success:Is ThereaCorrelation

  It is difficult to establish the correlation between education and accomplishment particularly if one examines wealth as the sole variable or the essential parameter.Of more concern in regard to education is wideningone’smind horizonWhere Education is viewed in terms of possessing a graduation certificate or a college degree, then there is no relationship between success and educationFor one to be successful in a given profession or field,heor she should have ample knowledge and understanding of the convolutions involved.Such knowledge do not necessarily come with an academic degree but can be acquired from field experience and experiences of others.It follows therefore that while there is some degree of correlation: success is not solely dependenton education

  Arguably, prescribed education in the modern world is overrated with parents and other members of the society hammering children and teenagers withtheimportance of obtaining a degree.However,success is mainly based on one’s craving for his work or undertaking and the ability to maintain a clear visionPerseverance andcraving for realization and constant innovation arejust but some keyimportant factors that determines the success of an individualThis does not however imply that there is no correlationbetweeneducationandaccomplishment

  While some people are of the opinion that education is necessary for one to achieve success, this is not necessarily true. On the other handbasic education helps in enhancing one’s critical thinking skills,allowing him or her to exploit natural talent and become successfulStill success is dependent on a number of factors save for education including but not limited to perseverancedeterminationhaving a clear visualization and the passion to pursue one’s dreams.Thisimplies that while thereis a relationship between education andaccomplishmentsitisof alow degree.

  语料分析

  地道表达1:haveampleknowledgeandunderstandingofsth

  雅思写作/托福写作运用:Having ample knowledge and understanding ofwriting means students canexpressthemselvesfreely可以替换常见的enough/alotofknowledge

  地道表达2:one’s cravingfor his work or undertaking and theability to maintain a clear vision

  雅思写作/托福写作运用:Ones carving for his workcanlead tosuccess可以替换常见的 hard-workingdiligent

  地道表达3:exploitnaturaltalent

  雅思写作/托福写作运用:Exploitingnaturaltalentcan fulfill one's potential

  教育不利于成功的观点句:

  Obtaining a degree does not however imply that there is a correlation between education andaccomplishment.

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