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雅思写作——龙头凤尾,如何拥有“凤尾”?

作者: 2022-03-23 15:22 来源:重庆编辑
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  雅思写作中很重要的一点就是有一个漂亮的结尾,我们要怎么做呢?为了帮助同学们更好了解,小编给大家整理了内容,赶紧了解吧。回答问题 answer the question

  E.g.1

  When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

  这个结尾段落明确的提出了自己的观点,不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。

  不要添加新的信息 not apply any new information

  E.g.2

  Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

  Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

  Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.

  用1句话明确自己的观点,幸福很难定义,可能有两个因素起到作用。

  2-3个句子为宜 2-3 sentences are enough

  E.g.3

  Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.

  Do you agree or disagree?

  Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.

  2句话,作者的态度很明确,学生不可能花所有的时间去学习,否者就会完全失去对学习的兴趣,所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。

  一般在结尾段的最开始部分,考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词,让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句:

  信号词:Finally, to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall

  句型:

  1. it can be concluded that…

  2. we can find that…

  3. I think it is also important to remember that

  4. the main point is to make sure that

  希望上面的内容能给有需要的同学提供帮助,也希望同学们可以取得好成绩。

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