It is said that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
题目大意
有人认为工作是人生中重要的事。没有事业的成功，人生就毫无意义。你同意吗？
思路解析
这是一道观点类题目，讨论工作是不是人生重要的事情，题目本身不难，观点包含了词“the most important”，因此我们建议持反对角度来写，即工作对人生确实重要，但还有很多其他重要的事情。
我们先来看，工作和事业成功对人生的意义。
首先，一个人的事业成功意味着能够拥有比较不错的经济收入，而高经济收入则意味着可以让自己和家人享受更好的物质生活。其次，事业成功可以让人获得成就感，当一个人努力工作并且获得成功时，因为完成了目标或帮助了他人，可以让人感受到自己的价值得以呈现。
但是，人生是否有意义，事业并不是的标准。毕竟如果不是为了赚钱，谁愿意996是吧。对于人生来说，身体健康、活的开心、家人和朋友的陪伴等都是重要的。一个人身体健康，才能够享受生活，不然有再多的财富和名望也没有意义。家庭和朋友的陪伴也能让一个人感到生活的温馨和幸福。
每个人对于生活的价值定义并不一样，有人追求事业成功，有人对物质追求比较低，生活比较佛系，更加追求身体健康或是家庭幸福。对于不同人来说，是没有办法一概而论的。
提纲
高分范文示例
Some people think career success is the most crucial indicator of a good, meaningful life. Personally, I completely disagree with the idea and would argue that there are more important aspects for us to take into consideration.
It is undeniable that work does constitute an important part of life, as career fulfilment can bring an individual a sense of achievement in a way nothing else can. Maslow’s hierarchy of Needs suggests that one needs to achieve his or her full potential, mostly through realizing career goals, to obtain peak experiences and self-actualization. Life can seem to be a bit less challenging and exciting without job fulfilment, especially for workaholics or those with a Type A personality. Therefore, it is safe to say that career development is no less than one of the most important things in a person’s life.
In spite of the points made above, I believe that there are other equally, if not more, significant elements that contribute to the meaning of one’s life. Health, for one thing, is a factor whose importance can never be overemphasized. The joy brought by career success can seem to be nothing but negligible and pointless without health, which is undoubtedly the cornerstone of life, no matter successful or not. Another important part is close relationship, which is the decisive factor of a happy life according to The Grant Study, a medical study conducted by Harvard Medical School. The study underwent a whole period of 75 years and involved nearly a thousand respondents, reaching the conclusion that a successful life is not achieved by wealth or fame, but happy, satisfying relationships with family and friends.
In conclusion, I believe that work is not the most important thing in life.
相关词汇和语法结构
take into consideration 把……考虑进去
career fulfilment 成业成就感
achieve one’s full potential 充分发挥自己的潜力
peak experiences 高分体验
self-actualization 自我实现
job fulfilment 工作成绩感
overemphasized 过分强调
close relationships 亲密关系
wealth or fame 财富或名誉
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